My Evaluation

This is my Evaluation for my final media product. It may take some time to load but please be patient. Enjoy!

Drafting and planning - My coursework Final draft

During two weeks me and my class waited for our coursework to be marked to receive feedback into how we could improve our coursework for it's final draft. 

After my meeting with my teacher I was informed that my coursework was of a high standard which could immediately be identified with its Indie Rock genre, while including the key conventions of a magazine and also having quite a variety in the font types included throughout the whole magazine.

After receiving my mark for my coursework I now have a more clearer idea what I can improve. The features of the magazine conveyed clearly were the essential conventions e.g the dateline, price, URL and bar code. More so, I included other aesthetic considerations such as the clothing of the artists included on my magazine and props that could have been used e.g the guitar my model Josh uses within the photography on the contents page. 

However, I did find that for my coursework did have several grammar and spelling mistakes that have now been rectified. Additionally, after my meeting I was told that the improvements I could make would mainly be focused within these areas; 

• The frame shots of my photography
• The variety of shot distances as appropriate
• Selecting Mise-en-scene

Drafting and Planning - Media institutions